svn commit: r41010 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors

[Giorgos Keramidas]

On 2013-02-18 16:01, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk at MIT.EDU> wrote:
> On Mon, 18 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote:
> >Author: eadler
> >Date: Mon Feb 18 19:54:21 2013
> >New Revision: 41010
> >URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41010
> >
> >Log:
> > While cvsup is deprecated, as long as it is documented and working,
> > don't document bogus, ancient, or useless parts.
> >
> > Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
> >
> >Modified:
> > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml
> >
> >Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml
> >-	<para>With this very useful feature, those users who are on
> >+	<para>With this very feature, those users who are on
>
> Do we care more that it is this particular feature or that it is a
> useful feature?  ("With this very ..." does not seem particularly
> consistent with our style.)

'With this very feature' can be understood also as 'with this specific
feature' or 'with precisely this feature', so it's syntactically
correct.  It _is_ a bit confusing though as a diff/change, so I'd
probably prefer the simpler 'With this feature' too.