svn commit: r40980 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing
Jeremie Le Hen
jlh at FreeBSD.org
Tue Feb 19 22:14:12 UTC 2013
On Tue, Feb 19, 2013 at 05:06:18PM -0500, Eitan Adler wrote:
>
> I did not intend to offend anyone and if I did, I apologize.
>
> Perhaps any of the following?
>
> "Twiddle with a poorly worded sentence."
> "Make this sentence more clear"
> or
> "Avoid references to the first person and clarify sentence."
Yes. Basically, let's try to be as neutral as possible.
Thank you very much for your understanding :).
Regards,
--
Jeremie Le Hen
Scientists say the world is made up of Protons, Neutrons and Electrons.
They forgot to mention Morons.
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