svn commit: r41015 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config

[Dru Lavigne]

Author: dru
Date: Tue Feb 19 15:25:28 2013
New Revision: 41015
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41015

Log:
  Minor fixes to r40959.
  
  Submitted by:  bjk
  Approved by:  bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Tue Feb 19 13:56:49 2013	(r41014)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Tue Feb 19 15:25:28 2013	(r41015)
@@ -711,7 +711,7 @@ $sshd_enable=YES</screen>
 	<username>root</username> console.</para>
     </note>
 
-    <para>To determine if a service is running, use
+    <para>To determine whether or not a service is running, use
       <option>status</option>.  For instance, to verify that
       <command>sshd</command> is running:</para>
 
@@ -1111,8 +1111,8 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,M
 
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>The status of the link (<literal>status</literal>) is
-	    <literal>active</literal>, indicating that the carrier is
-	    detected.  For <devicename>dc1</devicename>, the
+	    <literal>active</literal>, indicating that the carrier
+	    signal is detected.  For <devicename>dc1</devicename>, the
 	    <literal>status: no carrier</literal> status is normal
 	    when an Ethernet cable is not plugged into the
 	    card.</para>
@@ -1133,8 +1133,8 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,M
       <para>To configure the card, you will need
 	<username>root</username> privileges.  The network card
 	configuration can be performed from the command line with
-	&man.ifconfig.8; but will not persist after a reboot.
-	Instead, add the network card's configuration to
+	&man.ifconfig.8; but will not persist after a reboot unless
+	the network card's configuration is also added to
 	<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> using an editor.  Add a
 	line for each network card present on the system, as seen in
 	this example:</para>