svn commit: r40066 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild

[Mark Linimon]

Author: linimon
Date: Sun Nov 18 15:03:24 2012
New Revision: 40066
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40066

Log:
  Minor cleanups in preparation for big overhaul.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml	Sun Nov 18 14:58:02 2012	(r40065)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml	Sun Nov 18 15:03:24 2012	(r40066)
@@ -1726,7 +1726,8 @@ ganglia:*:102:102::0:0:User &:/usr/l
 	    </listitem>
 
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>We run the cluster on UTC:
+	      <para>We run the cluster on UTC.  If you have not set the clock
+		to UTC:
 		<screen>cp /usr/share/zoneinfo/Etc/UTC etc/localtime</screen>
 	      </para>
 	    </listitem>
@@ -2239,7 +2240,8 @@ ssh_cmd="/usr/local/bin/ssh"
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>For what was previously head, change
 	      <makevar>SRC_BRANCH_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_TAG</makevar> to
-	      <literal>RELENG_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_0</literal>.</para>
+	      <literal>RELENG_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_0</literal>
+	      (literal zero).</para>
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
@@ -2422,7 +2424,7 @@ zfs destroy -r a/snap/src-<replaceable>o
 	  with the following changes:</para>
 	  <itemizedlist>
 	    <listitem>
-	      <para>Change
+	      <para>Change the value of
 	        <makevar>SRC_BRANCH_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_TAG</makevar> to
 	        <literal>RELENG_<replaceable>branch</replaceable>_<replaceable>N</replaceable></literal>
 	        where <literal>N</literal> is the newest 'oldest' release