svn commit: r54297 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server

[Sergio Carlavilla]

On Sun, 28 Jun 2020 at 02:01, Hiroki Sato <hrs at freebsd.org> wrote:
>
> Sergio Carlavilla Delgado <carlavilla at FreeBSD.org> wrote
>   in <202006271723.05RHNAUm086528 at repo.freebsd.org>:
>
> ca> Author: carlavilla
> ca> Date: Sat Jun 27 17:23:09 2020
> ca> New Revision: 54297
> ca> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/54297
> ca>
> ca> Log:
> ca>   Because of the conversion of the documentation to Hugo/AsciiDoctor the
> ca>   screen was moved out of the callout.
> ca>
> ca>   Reviewed by:      bcr@
> ca>   Differential Revision:    https://reviews.freebsd.org/D25485
> ca>
> ca> Modified:
> ca>   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml
> ca>
> ca> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml
> ca> ==============================================================================
> ca> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml Fri Jun 26 07:04:58 2020        (r54296)
> ca> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml Sat Jun 27 17:23:09 2020        (r54297)
> ca> @@ -267,10 +267,9 @@ export EOL=1275289200<co xml:id="eol-id"/></programlis
> ca>           <literal>EOL</literal> can be derived from the date
> ca>           listed on the web site, using the &man.date.1; utility,
> ca>           for example:</para>
> ca> -
> ca> -     <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>date -j -f '%Y%m%d-%H%M%S' '20090401-000000' '+%s'</userinput></screen>
> ca>       </callout>
> ca>     </calloutlist>
> ca> +   <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>date -j -f '%Y%m%d-%H%M%S' '20090401-000000' '+%s'</userinput></screen>
> ca>        </step>
> ca>      </procedure>
> ca>    </sect1>
>
>  Please revert this or explain why this is required.  The original
>  structure was valid and the callout list after this change become
>  wrong.  The <screen> element must be associated to the second
>  <callout>.
>
> -- Hiroki

Hi Hiroki,

First of all, thanks for taking time to check my change :)

I made this change because it made the migration to hugo/asciidoctor
much easier, but I don't want to cause any problem.

I reverted the change, sorry for the inconvenience.

Bye, and again, thanks for taking time to check this.