svn commit: r48128 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/gnome

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Sat Jan 30 22:54:51 2016
New Revision: 48128
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48128

Log:
  Edit the news release for clarity.  With help from jgh.
  
  Approved by:	kwm

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/gnome/news.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/gnome/news.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/gnome/news.xml	Sat Jan 30 22:18:32 2016	(r48127)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/gnome/news.xml	Sat Jan 30 22:54:51 2016	(r48128)
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ News//EN"
 
           <p>The FreeBSD GNOME team proudly presents MATE 1.12 for FreeBSD.</p>
 
-          <p>This version is still build against GTK+ 2, and has a number
+          <p>This version of MATE uses the GTK+ 2 toolkit for stability, and has a number
             of bugfixes for the applets.</p>
         </event>
       </day>
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ News//EN"
             The official release notes for this release can be found at
             <a href="http://mate-desktop.org/blog/2015-06-11-mate-1-10-released/">http://mate-desktop.org/blog/2015-06-11-mate-1-10-released/</a></p>
 
-          <p>This version of MATE is still build on the GTK+ 2 toolkit.</p>
+          <p>This version of MATE is still built on the GTK+ 2 toolkit.</p>
 
           <p>Replace mate-dialogs with zenity and mate-calc with galculator.</p>