svn commit: r48562 - head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports

Ryusuke SUZUKI ryusuke at FreeBSD.org
Mon Apr 11 08:24:06 UTC 2016 

Author: ryusuke
Date: Mon Apr 11 08:24:05 2016
New Revision: 48562
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48562

Log:
  - Merge the following from the English version:
  
  	r47367 -> r48208	head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports/article.xml
  
  - Refine translation.
  - Update the link to "How to Report Bugs Effectively" article.

Modified:
  head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports/article.xml

Modified: head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports/article.xml
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--- head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports/article.xml	Sun Apr 10 21:33:25 2016	(r48561)
+++ head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports/article.xml	Mon Apr 11 08:24:05 2016	(r48562)
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