svn commit: r47442 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails
Allan Jude
allanjude at FreeBSD.org
Sun Sep 27 21:32:58 UTC 2015
Author: allanjude
Date: Sun Sep 27 21:32:57 2015
New Revision: 47442
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47442
Log:
Fix grammar in the jails handbook section
PR: 203350
Submitted by: Leonhard Campo <campol2 at rpi.edu>
Approved by: bcr (mentor)
Sponsored by: ScaleEngine Inc.
Sponsored by: EuroBSDCon DevSummit
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml Sat Sep 26 16:57:40 2015 (r47441)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml Sun Sep 27 21:32:57 2015 (r47442)
@@ -89,9 +89,9 @@
allowed to perform operations to the system outside of the
associated jail environment.</para>
- <para>This chapter provides an overview of jail terminology are
- how to use &os; jails. Jails are a powerful tool for system
- administrators, but their basic usage can also be useful for
+ <para>This chapter provides an overview of the terminology and
+ commands for managing &os; jails. Jails are a powerful tool for both system
+ administrators, and
advanced users.</para>
<para>After reading this chapter, you will know:</para>
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