svn commit: r47668 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

[Benjamin Kaduk]

Author: bjk
Date: Mon Oct 26 02:53:50 2015
New Revision: 47668
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47668

Log:
  A few minor edits to the 2015Q3 report
  
  Discovered while preparing the email version.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-07-2015-09.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-07-2015-09.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-07-2015-09.xml	Sun Oct 25 22:58:40 2015	(r47667)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-07-2015-09.xml	Mon Oct 26 02:53:50 2015	(r47668)
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@
       <task>
 	<p>Test the new stable release of GLib 2.46.x with the
 	  kqueue/kevent backend enabled (it was disabled with revision
-	  <a href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/ports?view=revision&revision=393663">r393663</a>.
+	  <a href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/ports?view=revision&revision=393663">r393663</a>).
 	  Currently several features are broken, especially in Thunar,
 	  xfce4-panel, and Xfdashboard.</p>
       </task>
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@
       </task>
 
       <task>
-	<p>Put more effort into support of <tt>node-gyp</tt> in the
+	<p>Put more effort into support for <tt>node-gyp</tt> in the
 	  USES framework</p>
       </task>
     </help>
@@ -1412,8 +1412,8 @@
 	instruction or by any locked read-modify-write operation.  The latter
 	approach is recommended by the optimization guides from Intel
 	and AMD.  It was noted that careful selection of the scratch
-	memory location, which is modified by the locked RWM
-	operation, can reduce the cost of barrier by avoiding false
+	memory location, which is modified by the locked RMW
+	operation, can reduce the cost of the barrier by avoiding false
 	data dependencies.  The corresponding optimization was
 	committed in r284901.</p>
 
@@ -3339,7 +3339,7 @@
 	Hot-plug Perforce Branch</url>
 
       <url href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/changeset/base/r281874">Commit
-	adding bridge save/restore.</url>
+	adding bridge save/restore</url>
 
       <url href="https://github.com/FreeBSDFoundation/freebsd/tree/pciehp">Github
 	branch with patches</url>