svn commit: r47484 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

[Ed Maste]

Author: emaste (src committer)
Date: Fri Oct  2 13:52:29 2015
New Revision: 47484
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47484

Log:
  Improve wording for r47478 change
  
  Submitted by:	wblock

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Oct  2 13:47:23 2015	(r47483)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Oct  2 13:52:29 2015	(r47484)
@@ -3460,12 +3460,12 @@ kern.sched.name: ULE</screen>
 
 	<answer>
 	  <para>&os; 10.1 and earlier executes a memory test early
-	    in the boot process.  This test takes several seconds
-	    if the system has a small amount of memory.  On systems
-	    with 10s or 100s of gigabytes of memory it can take
-	    a few minutes or more.  This test can
-	    be disabled by setting <literal>hw.memtest.tests</literal>
-	    to <literal>0</literal> in
+	    in the boot process.
+	    When the system has a small amount of memory, the test
+	    takes a few seconds.  Computers with tens or hundreds of
+	    gigabytes of memory can take several minutes to complete
+	    the test.  The memory test can be disabled by adding
+	    <literal>hw.memtest.tests=0</literal> to
 	    <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>.</para>
 
 	  <para>For more details, see &man.loader.conf.5;.</para>