svn commit: r47864 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs

[Christian Brueffer]

Author: brueffer
Date: Tue Dec 15 18:16:47 2015
New Revision: 47864
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47864

Log:
  Several minor wording, spelling and grammar improvements.
  
  PR:		204704
  Submitted by:	scottcheloha at gmail.com

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml	Tue Dec 15 15:01:06 2015	(r47863)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml	Tue Dec 15 18:16:47 2015	(r47864)
@@ -33,10 +33,10 @@
 	of core router products, running root name servers, hosting
 	major web sites, and as the foundation for widely used desktop
 	operating systems.  This is only possible because of the
-	diverse and world-wide membership of the
+	diverse and worldwide membership of the
 	volunteer &os; Project.</p>
 
-      <p><b>&os; 10.X</b> introduced many new features
+      <p><b>&os; 10.X</b> introduces many new features
 	and replaces many legacy tools with updated versions.</p>
 
       <ul>
@@ -105,16 +105,16 @@
 	  CAPABILITY_MODE have been added to the GENERIC kernel.</li>
 
 	<li><b>Hhook</b>:  (Helper Hook) and khelp(9) (Kernel Helpers)
-	  KPIs have been implemented.  These are a superset of
+	  KPIs have been implemented.  These are a superset of the
 	  pfil(9) framework for more general use in the kernel.  The
 	  hhook(9) KPI provides a way for kernel subsystems to export
-	  hook points that khelp(9) modules can hook to provide
+	  hook points that khelp(9) modules can hook into to provide
 	  enhanced or new functionality to the kernel.  The khelp(9)
 	  KPI provides a framework for managing khelp(9) modules,
 	  which indirectly use the hhook(9) KPI to register their hook
 	  functions with hook points of interest within the kernel.
-	  These allow a structured way to dynamically extend the
-	  kernel at runtime in an ABI preserving manner.</li>
+	  Together, they allow a structured way to dynamically extend the
+	  kernel at runtime in an ABI-preserving manner.</li>
 
 	<li><b>Accounting API</b> has been implemented.  It can keep
 	  per-process, per-jail, and per-login class resource
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
 	  implementation and takes user-configurable actions based on
 	  the set of rules it maintains and the current resource
 	  usage.  The rctl(8) utility has been added to manage the
-	  rules in userland.  Note that this is neither  built nor
+	  rules in userland.  Note that this is neither built nor
 	  installed by default.</li>
 
 	<li><b>USB</b> subsystem now supports USB packet filter.