svn commit: r45801 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Sun Oct 12 21:04:41 UTC 2014

Author: wblock
Date: Sun Oct 12 21:04:40 2014
New Revision: 45801
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45801

Log:
  Edit for clarity and consistency.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml	Sun Oct 12 20:53:29 2014	(r45800)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml	Sun Oct 12 21:04:40 2014	(r45801)
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
     <p>The third quarter of 2014 was another productive quarter for
       the FreeBSD project.  A lot of work has been done on various ARM
       platforms, with the goal of bringing them to Tier 1 status in
-      &os; 11 and the various ports teams have worked hard to improve
+      &os; 11.  The various ports teams have also worked hard to improve
       the state of &os; as a desktop operating system.  As usual,
       performance improvements feature in several places in this
       report and many of these can benefit from user benchmarking to
@@ -634,13 +634,13 @@
 	USERS.  Network configuration, ZFS options, and others are
 	also included.</p>
 
-      <p>Second part of project is about booting the fai (Fully
-	Automatic Installer) from the network by PXE.  Made installer
-	distro based on mfsbsd.  After boot, fai looks for the
+      <p>The Second part of the project is about booting the <tt>fai</tt> (Fully
+	Automatic Installer) from the network by PXE.  An installer
+	distro was created based on mfsBSD.  After boot, <tt>fai</tt> looks for the
 	"bootfile-name" parameter from the DHCP server.  This
-	parameter instructs fai where the bsdinstall script is
-	located.  Fai supports mac-based config or a default, if a
-	mac-based configuration file does not exist.</p>
+	parameter tells <tt>fai</tt> where the <tt>bsdinstall</tt> script is
+	located.  <tt>fai</tt> supports MAC-based configuration, or a default if a
+	MAC-based configuration file does not exist.</p>
     </body>
 
     <sponsor>
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@
     <body>
 
       <p>The newest graphics stack (that is, ports behind the
-	WITH_NEW_XORG knob) was enabled on all architectures.  The
+	<tt>WITH_NEW_XORG</tt> knob) was enabled on all architectures.  The
 	only regression is for users of Intel GPUs and &os; 8.X or
 	9.0.  Those releases lack the required kernel driver and
 	therefore <tt>xf86-video-intel</tt> will not work (the last
@@ -972,7 +972,7 @@
 
     <body>
       <p>Work on initial support of the IFC6410 board, which was
-	stopped due to bricked bootloader, has been started again.
+	stopped due to a bricked bootloader, has been started again.
 	This board has the Qualcomm Snapdragon S4 SoC, featuring the
 	Krait CPU.  This CPU is considered a "platform" for use in
 	smartphones, tablets, and smartbook devices.  Krait has many
@@ -2077,8 +2077,8 @@
       <p>This project aims to add support to the &os; kernel for
 	running in Xen Paravirtualised mode on amd64 systems.  This
 	project has finally reached a "Proof of Concept" stage on the
-	branch <a
-	href="http://svnweb.freebsd.org/base/projects/amd64_xen_pv/">projects/amd64_xen_pv</a></p>
+	branch
+	<url href="http://svnweb.freebsd.org/base/projects/amd64_xen_pv/">projects/amd64_xen_pv</url>.</p>
 
       <p>Testing and bug reports on various configurations is
 	encouraged!  The author is also seeking bounties to help
