svn commit: r43768 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-users

Dru Lavigne dru at FreeBSD.org
Tue Feb 4 18:55:30 UTC 2014


Author: dru
Date: Tue Feb  4 18:55:29 2014
New Revision: 43768
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43768

Log:
  Fix 2 grammos and a title capitalization.
  
  Sponsored by: iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-users/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-users/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-users/article.xml	Tue Feb  4 18:53:37 2014	(r43767)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-users/article.xml	Tue Feb  4 18:55:29 2014	(r43768)
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
       compiled from ports using <command>make</command>
       <buildtarget>package</buildtarget>.</para>
 
-    <para>A complete list of of all available ports and packages can
+    <para>A complete list of all available ports and packages can
       be found <link
 	xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/ports/master-index.html">here</link>.</para>
 
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ apache24_flags="-DSSL"</programlisting>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="network">
-    <title>Network configuration</title>
+    <title>Network Configuration</title>
 
     <para>Instead of a generic <emphasis>ethX</emphasis> identifier
       that &linux; uses to identify a network interface, &os; uses the
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ ifconfig_em0="DHCP"</programlisting>
 
     <para>In some &linux; distributions, one could look at
       <filename>/proc/sys/net/ipv4/ip_forward</filename> to determine
-      if <acronym>IP</acronym> forwarding is enabled.  In &os;
+      if <acronym>IP</acronym> forwarding is enabled.  In &os;,
       &man.sysctl.8; is instead used to view this and other system
       settings.</para>
 


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