svn commit: r43060 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook

[Eitan Adler]

Author: eadler
Date: Mon Oct 28 21:31:17 2013
New Revision: 43060
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43060

Log:
  Simplify the discussion of CR/LF processing.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Mon Oct 28 21:27:47 2013	(r43059)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Mon Oct 28 21:31:17 2013	(r43060)
@@ -46,7 +46,6 @@
       &tm-attrib.freebsd;
       &tm-attrib.unix;
       &tm-attrib.sun;
-      &tm-attrib.microsoft;
       &tm-attrib.general;
     </legalnotice>
 
@@ -811,12 +810,12 @@ PLIST_DIRS=	lib/X11/oneko</programlistin
       <programlisting>post-patch:
 	@${REINPLACE_CMD} -e 's|for Linux|for FreeBSD|g' ${WRKSRC}/README</programlisting>
 
-      <para>Quite often, there is a situation when the software being
-	ported, especially if it is primarily developed on &windows;,
-	uses the CR/LF convention for most of its source files.  This
+      <para>Quite often, software being
+	ported
+	uses the CR/LF convention for its source files.  This
 	may cause problems with further patching, compiler warnings,
-	scripts execution (<command>/bin/sh^M</command> not found),
-	etc.  To quickly convert all files from CR/LF to just LF, add
+	scripts execution (e.g., <command>/bin/sh^M</command> not found.)
+	To quickly convert all files from CR/LF to just LF, add
 	<literal>USE_DOS2UNIX=yes</literal> to the port
 	<filename>Makefile</filename>.  A list of files to convert can
 	be specified:</para>