svn commit: r43179 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide

[Eitan Adler]

Author: eadler
Date: Wed Nov 13 02:25:30 2013
New Revision: 43179
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43179

Log:
  Fix nits.
  
  Drop suggestion that the MFC time may be left off.
  
  Reported by:	gavin

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Tue Nov 12 16:02:30 2013	(r43178)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Wed Nov 13 02:25:30 2013	(r43179)
@@ -2209,7 +2209,7 @@ ControlPersist yes</screen>
 	      <row>
 		<entry><literal>Submitted by:</literal></entry>
 		<entry><para>The name and e-mail address of the person
-		  that submitted the fix; for committers, just the
+		  that submitted the fix; for developers, just the
 		  username on the &os; cluster.</para>
 		<para>If the submitter is the maintainer of the port
 		  to which you are commiting include "(maintainer)"
@@ -2223,7 +2223,7 @@ ControlPersist yes</screen>
 	      <row>
 		<entry><literal>Reviewed by:</literal></entry>
 		<entry>The name and e-mail address of the person or
-		  people that reviewed the change; for committers,
+		  people that reviewed the change; for developers,
 		  just the username on the &os; cluster.  If a
 		  patch was submitted to a mailing list for review,
 		  and the review was favorable, then just include
@@ -2233,7 +2233,7 @@ ControlPersist yes</screen>
 	      <row>
 		<entry><literal>Approved by:</literal></entry>
 		<entry><para>The name and e-mail address of the person or
-		  people that approved the change; for committers,
+		  people that approved the change; for developers,
 		  just the username on the &os; cluster.  It is
 		  customary to get prior approval for a commit if it
 		  is to an area of the tree to which you do not
@@ -2275,7 +2275,7 @@ ControlPersist yes</screen>
 		<entry>If the change is related to a security
 		  vulnerability or security exposure, include one or
 		  more references or a description of the
-		  issue.  If possible, include a VuXML URL or a CVE id.</entry>
+		  issue.  If possible, include a VuXML URL or a CVE ID.</entry>
 	      </row>
 	    </tbody>
 	  </tgroup>
@@ -2354,12 +2354,11 @@ MFC after:      <replaceable>2 weeks</re
 	      <replaceable>weeks</replaceable> option may be
 	      <literal>day</literal>, <literal>days</literal>,
 	      <literal>week</literal>, <literal>weeks</literal>,
-	      <literal>month</literal>, <literal>months</literal>, or
-	      may be left off (in which case, days will be
-	      assumed).</para>
+	      <literal>month</literal>,
+	      <literal>months</literal>.</para>
 	  </example>
 
-	  <para>In some cases you may need to combine some of
+	  <para>In many cases you may need to combine some of
 	    these.</para>
 
 	  <para>Consider the situation where a user has submitted a PR