svn commit: r42059 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Wed Jun 26 04:24:45 2013
New Revision: 42059
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42059

Log:
  Whitespace-only changes.  Translators, please ignore.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 26 04:23:10 2013	(r42058)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 26 04:24:45 2013	(r42059)
@@ -71,14 +71,14 @@
 	rather than <quote>you can copy the file to
 	  <filename>/tmp</filename></quote>.</para>
 
-      <para>Give clear, correct, <emphasis>tested</emphasis> examples.  A trivial example is better
-	than no example.  A good example is better yet.  Do not
-	give bad examples, identifiable by apologies or sentences like
-	<quote>but really it should never be done that way</quote>.
-	Bad examples are worse than no examples.  Give good examples,
-	because <emphasis>even when warned not to use the example
-	  as shown</emphasis>, the reader will usually just use the
-	example as shown.</para>
+      <para>Give clear, correct, <emphasis>tested</emphasis> examples.
+	A trivial example is better than no example.  A good example
+	is better yet.  Do not give bad examples, identifiable by
+	apologies or sentences like <quote>but really it should never
+	be done that way</quote>. Bad examples are worse than no
+	examples.  Give good examples, because <emphasis>even when
+	  warned not to use the example as shown</emphasis>, the
+	reader will usually just use the example as shown.</para>
 
       <para>Avoid <emphasis>weasel words</emphasis> like
 	<quote>should</quote>, <quote>might</quote>,