svn commit: r42390 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Tue Jul 23 00:00:21 2013
New Revision: 42390
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42390

Log:
  Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Mon Jul 22 23:56:53 2013	(r42389)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Tue Jul 23 00:00:21 2013	(r42390)
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 	A trivial example is better than no example.  A good example
 	is better yet.  Do not give bad examples, identifiable by
 	apologies or sentences like <quote>but really it should never
-	be done that way</quote>. Bad examples are worse than no
+	be done that way</quote>.  Bad examples are worse than no
 	examples.  Give good examples, because <emphasis>even when
 	  warned not to use the example as shown</emphasis>, the
 	reader will usually just use the example as shown.</para>
@@ -244,11 +244,10 @@
 	    <application>Emacs</application>.</para>
 
 	  <para>A period and spaces followed by a capital letter
-	    does not always mark a new sentence,
-	    especially in names.
-	    <quote>Jordan K. Hubbard</quote> is a good example.  It has
-	    a capital <literal>H</literal> following a period and a
-	    space, and is certainly not a new sentence.</para>
+	    does not always mark a new sentence, especially in names.
+	    <quote>Jordan K. Hubbard</quote> is a good example.  It
+	    has a capital <literal>H</literal> following a period and
+	    a space, and is certainly not a new sentence.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>
@@ -282,13 +281,13 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>Acronyms</title>
 
-      <para>Acronyms should be defined the first time
-	they appear in a document, as in: <quote>Network Time Protocol
-	(<acronym>NTP</acronym>)</quote>.
-	After the acronym has been defined, use
-	the acronym alone unless it makes more
-	sense contextually to use the whole term.  Acronyms are usually
-	defined only once per chapter or per document.</para>
+      <para>Acronyms should be defined the first time they appear in a
+	document, as in:
+	<quote>Network Time Protocol (<acronym>NTP</acronym>)</quote>.
+	After the acronym has been defined, use the acronym alone
+	unless it makes more sense contextually to use the whole term.
+	Acronyms are usually defined only once per chapter or per
+	document.</para>
 
       <para>All acronyms should be enclosed in
 	<sgmltag>acronym</sgmltag> tags.</para>