svn commit: r42266 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security

[Warren Block]

On Sat, 13 Jul 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:

> On Sat, 13 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote:
>
>> Author: wblock
>> Date: Sat Jul 13 03:33:20 2013
>> New Revision: 42266
>> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42266
>> 
>> Log:
>>  Fix a wording bug: action to resource.  Also fix some title
>>  capitalization and redundancy issues.
>>
>>  Submitted by:	MNIHKLOM (forum user, action/resource issue)
>> 
>> Modified:
>>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
>> 
>> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
>> ==============================================================================
>> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Sat Jul 13 
>> 01:50:56 2013	(r42265)
>> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Sat Jul 13 
>> 03:33:20 2013	(r42266)
>> @@ -3744,7 +3744,7 @@ VII. References <co id="co-ref"/></progr
>>       Potentially a single, more constrained user would require
>>       an additional label added, the resource database needs to be
>>       built using <command>cap_mkdb</command>, edits made to
>> -      the <filename>/etc/master.passwd</filename> file.  In
>> +      <filename>/etc/master.passwd</filename>.  In
>
> This sentence seems rather confused.  My best guess is that there used to be 
> a list of three things, and the last one was removed sloppily.

How about this:

   Potentially a single, more constrained user would require
   an additional label to be added, the resource database
   rebuilt using <command>cap_mkdb</command>, and edits made to
   <filename>/etc/master.passwd</filename>.