svn commit: r42259 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Fri Jul 12 04:05:39 2013
New Revision: 42259
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42259

Log:
  Fix title capitalization and indexterm.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml	Fri Jul 12 03:52:31 2013	(r42258)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml	Fri Jul 12 04:05:39 2013	(r42259)
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
     <para>The markup is clearly separate from the
       content.</para>
 
-    <para>Markup languages define what
+    <para>Markup languages define
       what the markup means and how it should be interpreted.</para>
 
     <para>Of course, one markup language might not be enough.  A
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@
       the paragraph elements, and so on.</para>
 
     <example>
-      <title>Elements within Elements; <sgmltag>em</sgmltag></title>
+      <title>Elements Within Elements; <sgmltag>em</sgmltag></title>
 
       <programlisting><sgmltag class="starttag">p</sgmltag>This is a simple <sgmltag class="starttag">em</sgmltag>paragraph<sgmltag class="endtag">em</sgmltag> where some
   of the <sgmltag class="starttag">em</sgmltag>words<sgmltag class="endtag">em</sgmltag> have been <sgmltag class="starttag">em</sgmltag>emphasized<sgmltag class="endtag">em</sgmltag>.<sgmltag class="endtag">p</sgmltag></programlisting>
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@
       then the default is <literal>left</literal>.</para>
 
     <example>
-      <title>Using An Element with An Attribute</title>
+      <title>Using an Element with an Attribute</title>
 
       <programlisting><sgmltag class="starttag">p align="left"</sgmltag>The inclusion of the align attribute
   on this paragraph was superfluous, since the default is left.<sgmltag class="endtag">p</sgmltag>
@@ -565,10 +565,10 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er
     </variablelist>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>Formal Public Identifiers (<acronym>FPI</acronym>s)
-	<indexterm significance="preferred">
-	  <primary>Formal Public Identifier</primary>
-	</indexterm></title>
+      <title>Formal Public Identifiers (<acronym>FPI</acronym>s)</title>
+      <indexterm significance="preferred">
+	<primary>Formal Public Identifier</primary>
+      </indexterm>
 
       <note>
 	<para>It is not necessary to know this, but it is useful
@@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er
       termed <quote>marked sections</quote>.</para>
 
     <example>
-      <title>Structure of A Marked Section</title>
+      <title>Structure of a Marked Section</title>
 
       <programlisting><![<replaceable>KEYWORD</replaceable>[
   Contents of marked section
@@ -1456,7 +1456,7 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er
 	  ignored and the second one will take effect.</para>
 
 	<example>
-	  <title>Using A Parameter Entity to Control a Marked
+	  <title>Using a Parameter Entity to Control a Marked
 	    Section</title>
 
 	  <programlisting>