svn commit: r42121 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Wed Jul  3 00:00:54 2013
New Revision: 42121
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42121

Log:
  Add a third column to the word list for notes about usage.  Remove the
    from the "Ports Collection" usage, that was unnecessary.  Add
  an entry for Subversion and a note about which form to use.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Tue Jul  2 18:01:29 2013	(r42120)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Wed Jul  3 00:00:54 2013	(r42121)
@@ -495,11 +495,12 @@ GB.  Hardware compression …</lite
       not on this list, ask about it on the &a.doc;.</para>
 
     <informaltable frame="none" pgwide="0">
-      <tgroup cols="2">
+      <tgroup cols="3">
 	<thead>
 	  <row>
 	    <entry>Word</entry>
 	    <entry>XML Code</entry>
+	    <entry>Notes</entry>
 	  </row>
 	</thead>
 
@@ -544,7 +545,6 @@ GB.  Hardware compression …</lite
 
 	  <row>
 	    <entry>Ports Collection</entry>
-	    <entry>Ports&nbsp;Collection</entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>
@@ -556,6 +556,19 @@ GB.  Hardware compression …</lite
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>
+	    <entry>Subversion</entry>
+
+	    <entry><sgmltag
+		class="starttag">application</sgmltag><literal>Subversion</literal><sgmltag
+		class="endtag">application</sgmltag></entry>
+	    <entry>Do not refer to the Subversion application as
+	      <literal>SVN</literal> in upper case.  To refer to the
+	      command, use <sgmltag
+		class="starttag">command</sgmltag><literal>svn</literal><sgmltag
+		class="endtag">command</sgmltag>.</entry>
+	  </row>
+
+	  <row>
 	    <entry>&unix;</entry>
 	    <entry><literal>&unix;</literal></entry>
 	  </row>