svn commit: r39813 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Fri Oct 26 18:38:55 2012
New Revision: 39813
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39813

Log:
  Refine the mention of freebsd-zfs partitions, and combine the mention of
  gpart(8) with the ZFS paragraph.  Also expand a few contractions.
  
  Submitted by:	Taras Korenko <ds at ukrhub.net>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Fri Oct 26 15:20:39 2012	(r39812)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Fri Oct 26 18:38:55 2012	(r39813)
@@ -1195,7 +1195,6 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
       there's the option of starting a shell where command-line
       programs like &man.gpart.8;, &man.fdisk.8;, and &man.bsdlabel.8;
       can be used directly.</para>
-    <!-- WB: mention ZFS here? -->
 
     <figure id="bsdinstall-part-guided-manual">
       <title>Selecting Guided or Manual Partitioning</title>
@@ -1401,16 +1400,18 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para><literal>freebsd-zfs</literal> - A &os; ZFS
-	    filesystem.  See <xref linkend="filesystems-zfs"/>.</para>
-	</listitem>
-
-	<listitem>
 	  <para><literal>freebsd-swap</literal> - &os; swap
 	    space.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
+      <para>Another partition type worth noting is
+	<literal>freebsd-zfs</literal>, used for partitions that will
+	contain a &os; ZFS filesystem.  See
+	<xref linkend="filesystems-zfs"/>.  &man.gpart.8; shows more
+	of the available <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition
+	types.</para>
+
       <para>Multiple filesystem partitions can be used, and some
 	people may prefer a traditional layout with separate
 	partitions for the <filename>/</filename>,
@@ -1419,9 +1420,6 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
 	  linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> for an
 	example.</para>
 
-      <para>See &man.gpart.8; for a complete list of available
-	<acronym>GPT</acronym> partition types.</para>
-
       <para>Size may be entered with common abbreviations:
 	<emphasis>K</emphasis> for kilobytes, <emphasis>M</emphasis>
 	for megabytes, or <emphasis>G</emphasis> for gigabytes.</para>
@@ -1731,7 +1729,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
 	  found during the scan are listed, followed by a description
 	  of the encryption types available for that network.  If the
 	  desired <acronym role="Service Set
-	    Identifier">SSID</acronym> doesn't appear in the list,
+	    Identifier">SSID</acronym> does not appear in the list,
 	  select <guibutton>[ Rescan ]</guibutton> to scan
 	  again.  If the desired network still does not appear, check
 	  for problems with antenna connections or try moving the
@@ -2019,7 +2017,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
       <para>Select <guibutton>[ Yes ]</guibutton>
 	or <guibutton>[ No ]</guibutton> according to how
 	the machine's clock is configured and press
-	<keycap>Enter</keycap>.  If you don't know whether the system
+	<keycap>Enter</keycap>.  If you do not know whether the system
 	uses UTC or local time, select
 	<guibutton>[ No ]</guibutton> to choose the more
 	commonly-used local time.</para>
@@ -2399,7 +2397,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
 
       <para>When the installation is complete, select
 	<guibutton>[ Reboot ]</guibutton> to reboot the
-	computer and start the new &os; system.  Don't forget to
+	computer and start the new &os; system.  Do not forget to
 	remove the &os; install CD, DVD, or USB memory stick, or the
 	computer may boot from it again.</para>
     </sect2>