svn commit: r39981 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

[Marc Fonvieille]

On Mon, Nov 12, 2012 at 02:58:44PM -0500, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
> On Sun, 11 Nov 2012, Eitan Adler wrote:
> 
> > Author: eadler
> > Date: Sun Nov 11 22:29:01 2012
> > New Revision: 39981
> > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39981
> >
> > Log:
> >  Reduce redundant markup and word and other minor problems reported by
> >  igor.  Limited additional checking was done of the surrounding content.
> >
> >  Approved by:	jkois (mentor, before merge conflict resolution)
> >
> > Modified:
> >  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
> >
> > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
> > ==============================================================================
> > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Nov 11 21:42:32 2012	(r39980)
> > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Nov 11 22:29:01 2012	(r39981)
> > @@ -923,7 +923,7 @@
> > 		  <para>Where the format is
> > 		    <literal>html-split</literal>, the files are bundled
> > 		    up using &man.tar.1;.  The resulting
> > -		    <filename>.tar</filename> file is then compressed
> > +		    <filename>.tar</filename> is then compressed
> 
> This would seem like a candidate where the "redundant" use of "file" 
> actually is helpful, since there is not a specific file name given.
>
[...]

Well, can we avoid all these sort of changes?  They are necessary?

[...]
> > +	    to make this work.  See &man.chmod.1; and
> > +	    &man.symlink.7; for more information.</para>
> >
> > 	  <warning>
> > -	    <para>The <option>-R</option> option does a
> > +	    <para><option>-R</option> does a
> 
> My understanding was that we did not like to start sentences with markup.
> 

Same here, again "redundant" useless sweep...

Please guys, stop these silly "redundant" commits.

-- 
Marc