www/103061: [patch] www/en/platforms/xbox.sgml

Sat Sep 9 10:50:20 UTC 2006

>Number:         103061
>Category:       www
>Synopsis:       [patch] www/en/platforms/xbox.sgml
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-www
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Sep 09 10:50:18 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Gabor Kovesdan
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.1-RELEASE-p3 amd64
>Organization:
n/a
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD server.t-hosting.hu 6.1-RELEASE-p3 FreeBSD 6.1-RELEASE-p3 #0: Sat Aug 19 11:08:15 CEST 2006 root at server.t-hosting.hu:/usr/src/sys/amd64/compile/FREEBSD amd64

>Description:

- Add &reg; after Xbox, where the word refers to the hardware itself
- Fix indentation, new levels should indented by two extra spaces

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

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Index: www/en/platforms/xbox.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/cvs/www/en/platforms/xbox.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.8 xbox.sgml
--- www/en/platforms/xbox.sgml	27 Aug 2006 15:45:26 -0000	1.8
+++ www/en/platforms/xbox.sgml	9 Sep 2006 10:38:21 -0000
@@ -9,54 +9,54 @@
 <html>
   &header;
 
-<h3>Introduction</h3>
+  <h3>Introduction</h3>
 
-<p>FreeBSD/xbox is a port of FreeBSD which aims to run on Microsoft&reg;
-  Xbox&reg; systems.  This project was started by <a
-  href="mailto:rink at FreeBSD.org">&a.rink;</a>, who did most of the patching
-  and coding.  <a href="mailto:ed at fxq.nl">Ed Schouten</a> helped with
-  reviewing patches and he also provided details on certain Xbox
-  internals.</p>
-
-<h3>Status</h3>
-
-<p>FreeBSD/xbox is supported in FreeBSD 6-STABLE and FreeBSD 7-CURRENT.
-  The framebuffer, Ethernet, sound and USB devices
-  (such as an USB keyboard for the console) are all supported.</p>
-
-<p>In order to aid people in installing the FreeBSD/xbox port, a combined
-  install/livecd has been <a
-  href="http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-stable/2006-August/027894.html">created</a>.
-  It is available <a
-  href="ftp://ftp.stack.nl/pub/freebsd-xbox/">here</a>.</p>
-
-<h3>Booting FreeBSD-CURRENT kernels</h3>
-
-<p>In order to boot FreeBSD 7-CURRENT from CVS, you must have an up-to-date
-  version of the Linux/xbox BIOS, called Cromwell (failure will result in your
-  kernel crashing immediately after loading).  A Cromwell with FreeBSD UFS
-  patches (this will make it able to load a kernel directly from an UFS file
-  system) is available in the ports tree at /usr/ports/sysutils/cromwell; it
-  can be flashed to the EEPROM using the /usr/ports/sysutils/raincoat port (as
-  long as your Xbox is below version 1.6).</p>
-
-<p><b>Note</b>: Several Xbox drives are known to reject certain types of media.
-  Should you experience random hangs, panics or corruption during installation,
-  try a different known-working DVD/CD-ROM.</p>
-
-<h3>Installing on the hard drive</h3>
-
-<p>You can do an installation using the Live CD's, but you will need to do
-  everything manually.  It is suggested to prepare your disk using an FreeBSD/i386
-  installation and set up the /boot/xboxlinux.cfg configuration
-  file yourself, so Cromwell can determine which kernel to load.</p>
-
-<h3>Links</h3>
-
-<ul>
-  <li><a href="http://www.xbox-linux.org/">The Linux Xbox project</a></li>
-  <li><a href="http://www.xbox-bsd.nl/">The FreeBSD/xbox project</a></li>
-</ul>
+  <p>FreeBSD/xbox is a port of FreeBSD which aims to run on Microsoft&reg;
+    Xbox&reg; systems.  This project was started by <a
+    href="mailto:rink at FreeBSD.org">&a.rink;</a>, who did most of the patching
+    and coding.  <a href="mailto:ed at fxq.nl">Ed Schouten</a> helped with
+    reviewing patches and he also provided details on certain Xbox&reg;
+    internals.</p>
+
+  <h3>Status</h3>
+
+  <p>FreeBSD/xbox is supported in FreeBSD 6-STABLE and FreeBSD 7-CURRENT.
+    The framebuffer, Ethernet, sound and USB devices
+    (such as an USB keyboard for the console) are all supported.</p>
+
+  <p>In order to aid people in installing the FreeBSD/xbox port, a combined
+    install/livecd has been <a
+    href="http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-stable/2006-August/027894.html">created</a>.
+    It is available <a
+    href="ftp://ftp.stack.nl/pub/freebsd-xbox/">here</a>.</p>
+
+  <h3>Booting FreeBSD-CURRENT kernels</h3>
+
+  <p>In order to boot FreeBSD 7-CURRENT from CVS, you must have an up-to-date
+    version of the Linux/xbox BIOS, called Cromwell (failure will result in your
+    kernel crashing immediately after loading).  A Cromwell with FreeBSD UFS
+    patches (this will make it able to load a kernel directly from an UFS file
+    system) is available in the ports tree at /usr/ports/sysutils/cromwell; it
+    can be flashed to the EEPROM using the /usr/ports/sysutils/raincoat port (as
+    long as your Xbox&reg; is below version 1.6).</p>
+
+  <p><b>Note</b>: Several Xbox&reg; drives are known to reject certain types of media.
+    Should you experience random hangs, panics or corruption during installation,
+    try a different known-working DVD/CD-ROM.</p>
+
+  <h3>Installing on the hard drive</h3>
+
+  <p>You can do an installation using the Live CD's, but you will need to do
+    everything manually.  It is suggested to prepare your disk using an FreeBSD/i386
+    installation and set up the /boot/xboxlinux.cfg configuration
+    file yourself, so Cromwell can determine which kernel to load.</p>
+
+  <h3>Links</h3>
+
+  <ul>
+    <li><a href="http://www.xbox-linux.org/">The Linux Xbox project</a></li>
+    <li><a href="http://www.xbox-bsd.nl/">The FreeBSD/xbox project</a></li>
+  </ul>
 
   &footer;
 </html>
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