www/76841: [PATCH] Fixes on www/en/docs.sgml

[Christian Brueffer]

The following reply was made to PR www/76841; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Christian Brueffer <chris at unixpages.org>
To: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou at cox.net>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit at freebsd.org
Subject: Re: www/76841: [PATCH] Fixes on www/en/docs.sgml
Date: Sun, 30 Jan 2005 17:03:00 +0100

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 > Index: docs.sgml
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 > RCS file: /home/ncvs/www/en/docs.sgml,v
 > retrieving revision 1.187
 > diff -u -r1.187 docs.sgml
 > --- docs.sgml	31 Dec 2004 14:57:31 -0000	1.187
 > +++ docs.sgml	30 Jan 2005 03:22:13 -0000
 > @@ -254,7 +254,7 @@
 >  	configure a FreeBSD client to boot from a PXE server.</small></p>
 > =20
 >      <p><a href=3D"&url.articles;/relaydelay/article.html">FreeBSD as
 > -	a greylist mail server</a>
 > +	a greylist mail server</a> (<tt>relaydelay</tt>)<br>
 >         <small>Implementing a greylist mail server on FreeBSD
 >  	using Sendmail, MySQL, Perl and the relaydelay
 >  	software.  This is an excellent method to use in the
 > @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@
 >  	engineering team to make production quality releases of the
 >  	FreeBSD Operating System. It describes the tools available
 >  	for those interested in producing customized FreeBSD releases
 > -	for corporate rollouts or commercial productization.</small></p>
 > +	for corporate rollouts or commercial production.</small></p>
 > =20
 
 Hmm, I'm not sure about the second change.  I haven't found the word
 productization in the Merriam Webster online dictionary or in
 dict.leo.org, but a quick google search seems to indicate that this is a
 common word.
 
 Judging from the description at http://www.maxrumpus.com/services_software.=
 html,
 the word makes sense here.
 
 Does anyone else have an opinion on this?
 
 - Christian
 
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