www/63032: www/internet.sgml - minor change in wording under security section

[Linh Pham]

>Number:         63032
>Category:       www
>Synopsis:       www/internet.sgml - minor change in wording under security section
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       serious
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-www
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Feb 18 11:00:32 PST 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Linh Pham
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.2.1-RC2 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD q.internal.closedsrc.org 5.2.1-RC2 FreeBSD 5.2.1-RC2 #0: Sun Feb 15 16:07:21 PST 2004 question at q.internal.closedsrc.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/Q i386
>Description:
The current wording under "High performance /and/ security" of:

"any 386 PC (or better) running FreeBSD"

should no longer be platform-specific since one can run IPFW, IPFILTER or
any other packet filter and/or firewall on an sparc64, amd64, ia64 or
even ppc (once ported, if not already ported).

I recommend changing it to read:

"any computer running FreeBSD"

to be more platform-agnostic.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- www_internet.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- internet.sgml.old	Wed Feb 18 10:55:40 2004
+++ internet.sgml	Wed Feb 18 10:56:18 2004
@@ -122,8 +122,8 @@
       <p>The FreeBSD developers are as concerned about security as they
 	are about performance. FreeBSD includes kernel support for
 	IP&nbsp;firewalling, as well other services, such as IP proxy
-	gateways.  If you put your corporate servers on the Internet, any 386
-	PC (or better) running FreeBSD can act as a network firewall to
+	gateways.  If you put your corporate servers on the Internet, any
+	computer running FreeBSD can act as a network firewall to
 	protect them from outside attack.</p>
       
       <p>Encryption software, secure shells, Kerberos, end-to-end encryption
--- www_internet.sgml.diff ends here ---


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