ports/67859: Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of postfix)

[Chris Pepper]

>Number:         67859
>Category:       ports
>Synopsis:       Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of postfix)
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-ports-bugs
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Jun 12 03:10:22 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Chris Pepper
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD www.reppep.com 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #15: Sun May 30 22:18:46 EDT 2004 root at www.reppep.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/REPPEP i386


	
>Description:
	Postfix's tlsmgr man page has some awkward and incorrect English.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	portinstall postfix; man tlsmgr
	
>Fix:
	Patch below
	

--- tlsmgr.8.diff begins here ---
--- tlsmgr.8	Wed Jun  9 23:36:12 2004
+++ tlsmgr.8.fixed	Fri Jun 11 22:33:44 2004
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@
 OpenSSL PRNG has a pool size of 8192 bits (= 1024 bytes). The pool
 is initially seeded at startup from an external source (EGD or
 /dev/urandom) and additional seed is obtained later during program
-run at a configurable period. The exact time of seed query is
-using random information and is equally distributed in the range of
-[0-\fBtls_random_reseed_period\fR] with a \fBtls_random_reseed_period\fR
+run at a configurable interval. The exact time of each successive seed
+query is randomly distributed in the range of
+[0-\fBtls_random_reseed_period\fR] with \fBtls_random_reseed_period\fR
 having a default of 1 hour.
 
 Tlsmgr can be run chrooted and with dropped privileges, as it will
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 .ad
 .fi
 Tlsmgr is not security-sensitive. It only deals with external data
-to be fed into the PRNG, the contents is never trusted. The session
+to be fed into the PRNG; its content is never trusted. The session
 cache housekeeping will only remove entries if expired and will never
 touch the contents of the cached data.
 .SH DIAGNOSTICS
--- tlsmgr.8.diff ends here ---


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