[Differential] [Commented On] D1438: FreeBSD callout rewrite and cleanup

Fri Feb 20 02:06:20 UTC 2015

wblock added inline comments.

INLINE COMMENTS
  share/man/man9/timeout.9:98 Missing the word "if".
  share/man/man9/timeout.9:126 British->American: s/behaviour/behavior/
  share/man/man9/timeout.9:140 Add comma after "zero".
  share/man/man9/timeout.9:295 Use "cannot".  "can not" with a space means "not doing it is allowed".
  share/man/man9/timeout.9:308 s/timeouts./timeouts are needed./
  share/man/man9/timeout.9:362 s/by/by the/
  share/man/man9/timeout.9:364 s/CPU/the CPU/
  share/man/man9/timeout.9:370 If this means "CPU selection cannot be changed while the callout subsystem is processing the callback for completion.", then s/can not/cannot/.
  share/man/man9/timeout.9:378 s/by the/by/

  Either "given by the func argument will" or "given by func will".  The second is less wordy,

REVISION DETAIL
  https://reviews.freebsd.org/D1438

To: hselasky, jhb, adrian, markj, emaste, sbruno, imp, lstewart, rwatson, gnn, rrs, kostikbel, delphij, neel, erj, remkolodder, bcr, brueffer, brd, allanjude, wblock
Cc: wblock, freebsd-net