[Bug 237725] Spelling in share/man/man4/bridge.4

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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=237725

Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org> changed:

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--- Comment #2 from Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org> ---
Hi Tom,

Thanks for the patch.  Just a few things I see:

-.Dd October 16, 2017
+.Dd May 3, 2019

We only bump the document date on content changes, unless that policy changed
and I missed it, we do not need to change it here.

 The TOE, TSO, TXCSUM and TXCSUM6 capabilities on all interfaces added to the
-bridge are disabled if any of the interfaces doesn't support/enable them.
+bridge are disabled if any of the interfaces don't support/enable them.

We do our best to avoid contractions, perhaps in this case "interfaces will not
support or enable them."?


-All the capabilities are restored when the interface is removed from bridge.
-Changing capabilities in run time may cause NIC reinit and the link flap.
+All the capabilities are restored when the interface is removed from the
+bridge.
+Changing capabilities in run time may cause the NIC to reinitialize and
+the link to flap.
 .Pp
 The bridge supports

This seems to move some words down onto a new line but, at least at a quick
look, there is still white space at EOL.  This might be my browser so please
let me know if I'm just crazy.  Thanks for the patch!

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