[Bug 223679] Minor Style Guide Violation in Section 8.8 of FAQ

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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=223679

            Bug ID: 223679
           Summary: Minor Style Guide Violation in Section 8.8 of FAQ
           Product: Documentation
           Version: Latest
          Hardware: Any
                OS: Any
            Status: New
          Severity: Affects Only Me
          Priority: ---
         Component: Documentation
          Assignee: freebsd-doc at FreeBSD.org
          Reporter: mikepagano113 at gmail.com

Created attachment 188012
  --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=188012&action=edit
This is a diff file fixing this bug.

Section 8.8 of the FAQ features the word "you" to direct the user. This is
incorrect form.
https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/disks.html#idp59472104

The original line read "You can then boot LILO from BootEasy." However, a
better way to express the line would be "Then boot LILO from BootEasy."

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