Documentation shortcoming

[Dru Lavigne]

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On Sun, 7/26/15, Hiroki Sato <hrs at FreeBSD.org> wrote:

 Subject: Re: Documentation shortcoming
 To: dru at freebsd.org, dru.lavigne at att.net
 Cc: freebsd-doc at FreeBSD.org, ruesing at kdo.de
 Date: Sunday, July 26, 2015, 4:01 PM
 
 Dru Lavigne <dru.lavigne at att.net>
 wrote
   in <1437908470.22608.YahooMailBasic at web184901.mail.gq1.yahoo.com>:
 
 dr> Apparently, this is only required for link local
 addresses, which
 dr> should be clarified in the Handbook. Can someone with
 more IPv6-clue
 dr> suggest a clearer wording so that both cases are
 understood?
 
>  I have a patch including this kind of clarification and other updates
>  (attached).  Can you review this?
 

Thank you for updating this content! I've attached a slightly modified patch, mostly small grammar tuning.

Cheers,

Dru
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