docs/185632: Handbook typo
Jack Force
jack1243star at gmail.com
Fri Jan 10 08:40:01 UTC 2014
>Number: 185632
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Handbook typo
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
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>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Fri Jan 10 08:40:00 UTC 2014
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>Originator: Jack Force
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>Description:
There is a typo in the Handbook.
Section 27.6.1. "Basic Configuration", first paragraph:
"If order to have..." => "In order to have..."
The following paragraph also starts with "In order to..." which is overly verbose.
>How-To-Repeat:
Navigate to the following URL:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/mail-advanced.html
>Fix:
The diff file attached makes the sentence more clear and concise.
Patch attached with submission follows:
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml (revision 43462)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml (working copy)
@@ -1028,10 +1028,9 @@
<para>Out of the box, one can send email to external hosts as
long as <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> is configured or
- the network has access to a configured
- <acronym>DNS</acronym> server. If order to have mail
- delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym> on the &os; host,
- do one of the following:</para>
+ the network has access to a configured <acronym>DNS</acronym>
+ server. To have mail delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym>
+ on the &os; host, do one of the following:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
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