docs/185632: Handbook typo

Jack Force jack1243star at gmail.com
Fri Jan 10 08:40:01 UTC 2014


>Number:         185632
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Handbook typo
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
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>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jan 10 08:40:00 UTC 2014
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>Originator:     Jack Force
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>Description:
There is a typo in the Handbook.
Section 27.6.1. "Basic Configuration", first paragraph:

"If order to have..." => "In order to have..."

The following paragraph also starts with "In order to..." which is overly verbose.
>How-To-Repeat:
Navigate to the following URL:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/mail-advanced.html
>Fix:
The diff file attached makes the sentence more clear and concise.

Patch attached with submission follows:

Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	(revision 43462)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	(working copy)
@@ -1028,10 +1028,9 @@
 
       <para>Out of the box, one can send email to external hosts as
 	long as <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> is configured or
-	the network has access to a configured
-	<acronym>DNS</acronym> server.  If order to have mail
-	delivered to the  <acronym>MTA</acronym> on the &os; host,
-	do one of the following:</para>
+	the network has access to a configured <acronym>DNS</acronym>
+	server.  To have mail delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym>
+	on the &os; host, do one of the following:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>


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