docs/182004: Missing a word(a nother solution).

[Matt Penna]

On Sep 10, 2013, at 8:37 PM, Li <fender0107401 at gmail.com> wrote:

>> Number:         182004
>> Category:       docs
>> Synopsis:       Missing a word(a nother solution).
>> Confidential:   no
>> Severity:       non-critical
>> Priority:       low
>> Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>> State:          open
>> Quarter:        
>> Keywords:       
>> Date-Required:
>> Class:          doc-bug
>> Submitter-Id:   current-users
>> Arrival-Date:   Wed Sep 11 00:40:00 UTC 2013
>> Closed-Date:
>> Last-Modified:
>> Originator:     Li
>> Release:        9.1 Release
>> Organization:
>> Environment:
>> Description:
> I am sorry.
> 
> I reported this problem a few minutes ago, but I did not give a perfect solution.
> 
> In our handbook: 7.5.3. KMyMoney
> 
> Here is the original sentence:
> KMyMoney is a personal finance created by the KDE community.
> 
> I think the better one should be:
> KMyMoney is a personal financial tool created by the KDE community.
> 
> ============================================================
> 
> In other words, I think we should add “tool” and also change “finance” to “financial”.



In this case, I think the original suggestion of "personal finance tool" is more correct. "Personal finance" is a widely used term. Compare to "corporate finance" or "public finance."

(I just rejoined the list after an 11-year hiatus. Greetings to all.)

	Matt