Handbook Jail Chapter rewrite available for critique

[Fbsd8]

To all interested parties;

I have completed the final draft of the total rewrite of FreeBSD's
handbook Chapter 16 on Jails.

Before submitting my work for submission to the documentation group for
insertion in the handbook I am looking for critique of the work to find
errors in concept, wrong use of words, or anything to make it better.

All feedback welcomed. Please email me directly so we keep the noise 
down on the mailing list.

Use this URL to access it  http://www.jails.a1poweruser.com/


Thank You.