en/handbook/basics: proposed corrections #2

[Taras Korenko]

On Thu, Dec 12, 2013 at 08:31:58AM -0700, Warren Block wrote:
> On Thu, 12 Dec 2013, Taras Korenko wrote:
> >  ...
> >  Could anyone review that?
> >  ...
> ...
> @@ -637,7 +639,7 @@
> 
>         <para>&os; provides a variety of different commands to manage
>          user accounts.  The most common commands are summarized in
> -       Table 4.1, followed by some examples of their usage.  Refer to
> +       the subsequent table, followed by some examples of their usage.  Refer to
>          the manual page for each utility for more details and usage
>          examples.</para>
> 
> WB: "See" is simpler than "refer to".  An xml:id can be added to that 
> table and linked here.  That is also useful when referring to the page 
> in HTML, because it becomes an anchor. ...

  A xml:id was avoided intentionally: this table is pretty close to the
text, from which the reference is made.

  An updated version follows.
-- 
  WBR, Taras Korenko
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