Updates to features.html

[Cpet Services]

Thank you for the tips.

On Mon, Oct 1, 2012 at 12:34 PM, Eitan Adler <lists at eitanadler.com> wrote:

> On 1 October 2012 11:00, Cpet Services <cpetservice at gmail.com> wrote:
> > I am trying to update features.html. Please look at
> > http://cpet.multics.org/freebsddocs/data/features.html
>
> General comments:
>
> This page should be aimed at people that may have heard of FreeBSD but
> are not current users. As such avoid using FreeBSD terminology or
> giving configuration information. This of this as a marketing
> document, not a technical one.
>
> Specific comments:
> ""Over ten years of work have been put into..." - its a bit older than
> 10 years now ;)
> "FreeBSD 1/i386 a.out binaries on FreeBSD/amd64" - pretty cool, but a
> feature?
> Hhook - the description is pretty technical, and presupposes knowledge
> of pfil(9) - perhaps some more general text is needed?
> Accounting API - no need to specify how to enable it - perhaps make
> this a link to the handbook page. Actually it would be cool if *all*
> the headers were links to handbook pages.
>
> I didn't look in detail past the 9.0 section.
>
> > And tell me what you think of it.
>
> Thanks for working on this: this is one of the most important pages on
> the website! I hope that your work makes it in.
>
> Have you seen http://wiki.freebsd.org/WhatsNew/FreeBSD10 as well?
>
> --
> Eitan Adler
>



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