Request for Review: pkgng documentation for the Handbook

[Eitan Adler]

On 16 November 2012 11:58, Glen Barber <gjb at freebsd.org> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I would like to get feedback on recent commits to the projects/pkgng/
> branch, which adds documentation for pkgng to the Handbook.
>
> There are a few sections on my todo list, but I feel what is there now
> covers the basics for FreeBSD users.
>
> The diff is attached, and rendered output is here:
>
>     http://people.freebsd.org/~gjb/pkgng/data/doc/en/books/handbook/pkgng-intro.html
>
> I would like to merge this into head/ when 9.1-RELEASE is announced.

a few comments.

5.5.1 - please make it clear that this step is not revertible once pkg
has been used to manipulate the database.
5.5.3.4 - is "pkg audit -F" required to update the audit database as
well or it only needed the first time?
5.5.4.4 - thanks for calling attention to the difference between
portmaster and pkg in the order of arguments



-- 
Eitan Adler