CfR: config chapter changes
Chad Perrin
perrin at apotheon.com
Wed Feb 15 21:34:49 UTC 2012
On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 11:03:11PM -0500, Glen Barber wrote:
> On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 10:36:19PM -0500, Eitan Adler wrote:
> >
> > + Because of the system crontab, there is usually no need to
> > + create a user crontab for <username>root</username>.</para>
>
> "Because of the system crontab" is something I'm not fond of. I'd
> prefer "Since the system crontab effectively invokes the specified
> commands as root..." or something. Not a nit directly about your patch;
> I wasn't fond of the original version.
I'm not crazy about using a time-ordering term ("since") as a synonym for
a term indicating causality ("because"). How about "Because the system
crontab effectively invokes . . ." ?
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