CfR: config chapter changes
Warren Block
wblock at wonkity.com
Wed Feb 15 17:29:45 UTC 2012
On Tue, 14 Feb 2012, Glen Barber wrote:
> On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 11:03:11PM -0500, Glen Barber wrote:
>>> @@ -547,11 +548,8 @@
>>> day of the week. All these fields must be numeric values, and follow
>>> the twenty-four hour clock. The <literal>who</literal> field is special,
>>> and only exists in the <filename>/etc/crontab</filename> file.
>>> - This field specifies which user the command should be run as.
>>> - When a user installs his or her <filename>crontab</filename> file, they
>>> - will not have this option. Finally, the <literal>command</literal>
>>> option is listed.
>>>> - This is the last field, so naturally it should designate the command
>>> - to be executed.</para>
>>> + This field specifies which user the command should be run
>>> + as. The last field is the command to be executed.</para>
>>
>> Grammar nit: What do you think about "This field specifies the user
>> <username>root</username> under which the command should run." ?
>>
>
> Wording issue on my part. What I meant was: "This field specifies the
> user under which <username>root</username> should invoke the command."
How about
"user as which <username>root</username> will run the command."
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