patch for ThwackAFAQ differences-to-other-bsds

[Eitan Adler]

On 16 December 2012 19:34, Alex Weber <alexwebr at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hello list,
>
> This is my first patch to the FreeBSD docs, so please let me know if
> I've done something wrong! :)

This is a really good start!

A few comments.  Almost all of them are formatting, rather than
content nits. This is good. :)

- Try not to change whitespace and content in the same diff.  This
makes it harder for our translators to see what changed.
- The maximum line length is 70 (with some exceptions, e.g., for links)
- "FreeBSD" is spelled "&os;"
- http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/openssh.html
is spelled &url.books.handbook;/openssh.html
- ssh(1)  can also be spelled &man.ssh.1;
- items at the same indentation level should have an extra newline
- sentences have double spaces

I've attached a modified diff so you could see how it may look.




>
> This patch seeks to update the FAQ question "What are the differences
> between FreeBSD and NetBSD, OpenBSD, and other open source BSD operating
> systems?" listed in the ThwackAFAQ wiki.
>
> I've attached the patch as 'differences-to-other-bsds.patch'.
>
> -Alex Weber
>
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Eitan Adler
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