docs/157452: grammar and style nits in ipfw.8

[Benjamin Kaduk]

The following reply was made to PR docs/157452; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk at MIT.EDU>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit at freebsd.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/157452: grammar and style nits in ipfw.8
Date: Tue, 31 May 2011 00:52:00 -0400 (EDT)

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 On Tue, 31 May 2011, FreeBSD-gnats-submit at freebsd.org wrote:
 
 >
 > http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=157452
 >
 >> Category:       docs
 >> Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 >> Synopsis:       grammar and style nits in ipfw.8
 
 And here's the second patch.  I change the Xr from setfib(1) to setfib(2) 
 since the latter mentions a "current system maximum" number of fibs; 
 mention of the 16-fib limit to come in a separate PR.
 
 -Ben Kaduk
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