docs/157317: [patch] wording adjustments to usbdump.8 man page

Warren Block wblock at wonkity.com
Wed May 25 13:50:09 UTC 2011


>Number:         157317
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] wording adjustments to usbdump.8 man page
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          sw-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed May 25 13:50:08 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Warren Block
>Release:        8-stable
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD lightning 8.2-STABLE FreeBSD 8.2-STABLE #0: Sat May 21 15:01:13 MDT 2011     root at lightning:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/LIGHTNING  i386
>Description:
Small changes to usbdump.8 wording to improve consistency and clarity.
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
Apply patch.

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- /usr/src/usr.sbin/usbdump/usbdump.8.orig	2011-05-25 07:32:56.000000000 -0600
+++ /usr/src/usr.sbin/usbdump/usbdump.8	2011-05-25 07:43:19.000000000 -0600
@@ -53,21 +53,21 @@
 Snapshot bytes from each packet.
 .It Fl v
 Enable debugging messages.
-When it defined multiple times the verbose level increases.
+When given multiple times, the verbosity level increases.
 .It Fl w Ar file
 Write the raw packets to file.
 .El
 .Sh EXAMPLES
-Captures the USB raw packets alive on usbus2:
+Capture the USB raw packets alive on usbus2:
 .Pp
 .Dl "usbdump -i usbus2 -s 256 -v"
 .Pp
-Dumps the USB raw packets of usbus2 into the file without packet
+Dump the USB raw packets of usbus2 into the file without packet
 size limit:
 .Pp
 .Dl "usbdump -i usbus2 -s 0 -w /tmp/dump_pkts"
 .Pp
-Read the USB raw packets from the file:
+Read and display the USB raw packets from the file:
 .Pp
 .Dl "usbdump -r /tmp/dump_pkts -v"
 .Sh SEE ALSO


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