docs/157317: [patch] wording adjustments to usbdump.8 man page
Warren Block
wblock at wonkity.com
Wed May 25 13:50:09 UTC 2011
>Number: 157317
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] wording adjustments to usbdump.8 man page
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: sw-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Wed May 25 13:50:08 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Warren Block
>Release: 8-stable
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD lightning 8.2-STABLE FreeBSD 8.2-STABLE #0: Sat May 21 15:01:13 MDT 2011 root at lightning:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/LIGHTNING i386
>Description:
Small changes to usbdump.8 wording to improve consistency and clarity.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Apply patch.
Patch attached with submission follows:
--- /usr/src/usr.sbin/usbdump/usbdump.8.orig 2011-05-25 07:32:56.000000000 -0600
+++ /usr/src/usr.sbin/usbdump/usbdump.8 2011-05-25 07:43:19.000000000 -0600
@@ -53,21 +53,21 @@
Snapshot bytes from each packet.
.It Fl v
Enable debugging messages.
-When it defined multiple times the verbose level increases.
+When given multiple times, the verbosity level increases.
.It Fl w Ar file
Write the raw packets to file.
.El
.Sh EXAMPLES
-Captures the USB raw packets alive on usbus2:
+Capture the USB raw packets alive on usbus2:
.Pp
.Dl "usbdump -i usbus2 -s 256 -v"
.Pp
-Dumps the USB raw packets of usbus2 into the file without packet
+Dump the USB raw packets of usbus2 into the file without packet
size limit:
.Pp
.Dl "usbdump -i usbus2 -s 0 -w /tmp/dump_pkts"
.Pp
-Read the USB raw packets from the file:
+Read and display the USB raw packets from the file:
.Pp
.Dl "usbdump -r /tmp/dump_pkts -v"
.Sh SEE ALSO
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
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