RFC: New Handbook section - HAST

[Benedict Reuschling]

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Am 27.02.11 11:36, schrieb Daniel Gerzo:
> Hello guys,
> 
>   I have prepared a new Handbook section covering HAST.  The tech stuff
>   has been reviewed by Pawel and Mikolaj Golub, so from the tech point of
>   view it should be all correct.  Unfortunately, none of us is native
>   English speaker, therefore I would like to ask you guys to review the
>   language and styling of the new section.
> 
>   The patch is attached and can be also found online at [1] and a built
>   version is available at [2].
> 
>   Thanks in advance.
> 
>   [1] http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/hast.diff
>   [2] http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/FreeBSD/hast.html
> 


Hi Daniel,

great writeup, this will make a good addition to the Handbook once it's
finished. I've found some typos and attached a diff with corrections.

I'm not an english native speaker myself (and I don't play one on TV),
but I think the ones I found are pretty obvious.

Kind regards

Benedict Reuschling
FreeBSD Doc Committer

The FreeBSD Documentation Project
FreeBSD German Documentation Project - https://doc.bsdgroup.de
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