Call for a final review: freebsd-update Server article

[Manolis Kiagias]

Hey all,

This is a call for a final review of the freebsd-update server article 
("Build Your Own FreeBSD Update Server") that has been in our PR queue 
for way too long (unfortunately). It was submitted by Jason Helfman on 
2009 and there were more than a few reviews, patches and changes back 
then by numerous people. It was never committed though, as we were 
plagued by licensing / legal issues which are now resolved.
In the meantime the article was also published in BSD Magazine and Jason 
has further refined the text and the procedure so it should be even more 
clear now.
I believe this is going to be a valuable article for our documentation 
set, esp considering that people who manage FreeBSD servers tend to have 
quite a few of them :)

Here is the final html build of the article:

http://www.freebsdgr.org/all/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/index.html

and you can grab the sgml file from my mercurial repository here:

http://mercurial.freebsdgr.org/mercurial/freebsd-doc-el/file/tip/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server

Please concentrate your comments on the content rather than whitespace 
or formatting of the SGML source.  I will prepare the source to Doc 
Project standards before committing.

Thanks in advance,
manolis@