PXE Booting with an NFS root file system
Craig Rodrigues
rodrigc at crodrigues.org
Wed Aug 31 21:32:02 UTC 2011
On Tue, Aug 30, 2011 at 7:41 AM, Warren Block <wblock at wonkity.com> wrote:
>
> Overall, looks quite good. A few minor suggestions:
>
> 31.8.1
>
> "5. Enable inetd"
> Use &man.inetd.8; instead of plain "inetd". Might be needed for
> other commands, or at least the first mention of them.
>
> "11. Replace "myhost.mydomain.com" with the hostname"
> Use <replaceable>myhost.example.com</replaceable>, maybe also use
> it in the programlisting.
>
> "14. Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR} in a chroot environment by"
> Can be read three ways:
> 1. "Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR}-in-a-chroot-environment by"
> 2. "Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR}-in-a-chroot's environment by"
> 3. "Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR} by using a chroot environment"
>
> Some rearrangement of that sentence could help.
>
> Thanks!
>
Hi,
Thanks. I have incorporated your feedback and updated the page:
http://people.freebsd.org/~rodrigc/doc/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-pxe-nfs.html
and the patch is here:
http://people.freebsd.org/~rodrigc/nfs-pxe.diff.txt
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Craig Rodrigues
rodrigc at crodrigues.org
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