docs/160284: [patch] Inconsistent spacing between colons in French translation of Dtrace Handbook chapter.
Isabell Long
isabell121 at gmail.com
Mon Aug 29 16:50:07 UTC 2011
>Number: 160284
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] Inconsistent spacing between colons in French translation of Dtrace Handbook chapter.
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
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>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon Aug 29 16:50:06 UTC 2011
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>Originator: Isabell Long
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>Description:
I was just reading through the recently committed French translation of the
Dtrace Handbook chapter and noticed a few punctuation inconsistencies that
I hadn't picked up on when I proofread my translation. Sometimes, there is
no space before a colon, but at other times there is. For other French
translations, convention seems to be no space before a colon. The attached
patch fixes these inconsistencies for this document.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
See attached patch.
Patch attached with submission follows:
Index: chapter.sgml
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RCS file: /home/isabell/freebsd/doc-cvs/doc/fr_FR.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/dtrace/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -r1.1 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml 13 Jun 2011 16:22:06 -0000 1.1
+++ chapter.sgml 29 Aug 2011 16:41:46 -0000
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@
<note>
<para>Les utilisateurs de l'architecture AMD64 devraient ajouter
la ligne suivante à leur fichier de configuration de
- noyau :</para>
+ noyau:</para>
<programlisting>options KDTRACE_FRAME</programlisting>
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@
<para>Le système devrait maintenant supporter &dtrace;.
Pour afficher toutes les sondes, l'administrateur peut
- maintenant executer la commande :</para>
+ maintenant executer la commande:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dtrace -l | more</userinput></screen>
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
des informations systèmes. Il y a des scripts pour
vérifier les fichiers ouvertes, la mémoire,
l'usage du <acronym>CPU</acronym> et beaucoup plus. Il faut
- extraire les scripts avec la commande suivante :</para>
+ extraire les scripts avec la commande suivante:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gunzip -c DTracetoolkit* | tar xvf -</userinput></screen>
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