docs/159898: [patch] libusb.3 whitespace, markup, grammar fixes
Hans Petter Selasky
hselasky at c2i.net
Sat Aug 20 14:10:12 UTC 2011
The following reply was made to PR docs/159898; it has been noted by GNATS.
From: Hans Petter Selasky <hselasky at c2i.net>
To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk at mit.edu>
Cc: "bug-followup at freebsd.org" <bug-followup at freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: docs/159898: [patch] libusb.3 whitespace, markup, grammar fixes
Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2011 16:06:05 +0200
On Friday 19 August 2011 17:22:08 Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
> (was: Re: Fwd: svn commit: r224917 - head/lib/libusb)
>
> On Fri, 19 Aug 2011, Hans Petter Selasky wrote:
> > On Friday 19 August 2011 05:40:46 Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
> >> Dear Hans Petter,
> >>
> >> I saw a couple grammar and style issues as this went by, and ended up
> >> going through the whole man page. Could you take a look at docs/159898
> >> and make sure I didn't change anything factually incorrectly?
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >>
> >> Ben Kaduk
> >
> > Looks good!
> >
> > One more change I would suggest:
> >
> > +A convenience function to open a device with vendor and producd IDs
> >
> > Into:
> >
> > +A convenience function to open a device by vendor and product IDs
> >
> > --HPS
>
> Updated patch with comments from hps -- thanks for catching it!
>
> -Ben
Looks good. Who will commit it?
--HPS
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