docs/159854: grammar updates for carp.4

[Benjamin Kaduk]

The following reply was made to PR docs/159854; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk at MIT.EDU>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit at freebsd.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/159854: grammar updates for carp.4
Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2011 20:21:01 -0400 (EDT)

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 And the main diff.
 
 -Ben
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