docs/159854: grammar updates for carp.4
Ben Kaduk
kaduk at mit.edu
Thu Aug 18 00:20:08 UTC 2011
>Number: 159854
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: grammar updates for carp.4
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Thu Aug 18 00:20:07 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Ben Kaduk
>Release: 9-current
>Organization:
MIT SIPB
>Environment:
n/a
>Description:
Some grammar fixups for carp.4 (also a piece of markup).
There was also a long line and trailing whitespace in one spot, so I have a separate whitespace.diff.txt to be applied prior to the main diff. I only get one attachment in the webform, so the second diff will come in as a reply to the ticket.
>How-To-Repeat:
man 4 carp
>Fix:
Patch attached with submission follows:
--- carp.4.orig 2011-08-17 14:12:08.000000000 -0400
+++ carp.4.whitespace 2011-08-17 14:13:19.000000000 -0400
@@ -38,7 +38,8 @@
.Nm
interface is a pseudo-device that implements and controls the
CARP protocol.
-CARP allows multiple hosts on the same local network to share a set of IP addresses.
+CARP allows multiple hosts on the same local
+network to share a set of IP addresses.
Its primary purpose is to ensure that these
addresses are always available, but in some configurations
.Nm
@@ -184,7 +185,7 @@
event.
Please see
.Xr devd.conf 5
-and
+and
.Sx EXAMPLES
section for more information.
.Sh EXAMPLES
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