newbies page (ppp)

[Glen Barber]

Hi Ryusuke,

On 12/9/10 8:31 AM, Ryusuke SUZUKI wrote:
> Hello,
> 
> "Resorces for Newvies" page,
> http://www.freebsd.org/projects/newbies.html
> 
>> The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is a lot of documentation
>> to help. You might start with at least those parts of the Handbook that are relevant
>> to your needs, and explore the ppp page for links to the other valuable information
>> and the latest updates.
> 
>  "The first thing many people need to set up is ppp,..."
> 
>  Do you agree?
> 
>  I suspect that many people need not set up ppp these days.
> 
>  How about the following patch?
> 
> diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml
> --- newbies.sgml	9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000	1.58
> +++ newbies.sgml	9 Dec 2010 13:23:06 -0000
> @@ -70,9 +70,8 @@
>            beginners.  You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy
>            this one.</p></li>
> 
> -      <li><p>The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is
> -          a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those
> -          parts of the
> +      <li><p>There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp.
> +	  You might start with at least those parts of the

I think with this rewording, "at least" can be removed.

Best regards,

-- 
Glen Barber