A seggestion about Chapter 29.

[Warren Block]

On Thu, 26 Aug 2010, Jason wrote:

> I've attached a patch that should suffice. 
> -j
>
> On Thu, Aug 26, 2010 at 11:40:16PM +0800, Li thus spake:
>> Hi all:
>> 
>> FreeBSD Handbook -> Chapter 29 Network Servers ->
>> 29.2 The inetd ?Super-Server? -> 29.2.3 Command-Line Options:
>> 
>>> Novice users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually
>>> do not need to be modified, although we mention the rate-limiting
>>> options below as they be useful should you find that you are
>>> receiving an excessive amount of connections.
>>> A full list of options can be found in the inetd(8) manual.
>> 
>> I am not a native English speaker, but I think this sentence is too long.
>> 
>> It may cause some confusion.
>> 
>> So, I suggest some modify it.

This is from a forums thread, where I posted a rewrite of that poor 
first sentence:

http://forums.freebsd.org/showpost.php?p=99145&postcount=7